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Eaten Alive...

Running for my life,
Running pounding feet,
Sweat pouring down.

Ouch, I trip,
I fall,
I break my leg.

Oh no,
He is coming,
I can hear the pounding of feet.

Screaming,
Shouting,
HELP ME!

Oh please,
I plead,
Don't do this to me.

Dragging,
Hitting,
Knocking me out.

Oh no,
I awake,
Ouch! Fuck!
I'm not a damn steak.

Oh please don't,
I don't want this to happen,
I feel the pain.

Squirt, Squirt,
Spazing out,
I'm being eaten alive,
Just kill me now.

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FEAR of being eaten alive

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  • crimsondew
    April 29, 2008

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    My..a fear well expressed..one can feelthe pain and anguish here...
    Well done..
    All the best in the contest...


  • Perception
    April 13, 2008

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    Very interesting. I'm not really sure what was going on towards the end... But, I think this is very intense you really had me paying attention... Your words were powerful.

    Great job, and good luck in your contest