Love finds a way,
Into your life no matter,
How far away it is.
His simple caring words,
Wrap me in a blanket,
Of security.
His smile is as fair,
As a gently summer breeze.
His voice as soothing,
As the calm gentle sea.
Talking for hours,
At times not an end.
Hearts always beating,
Always beating for him.
His eyes have a star,
Sparkle bright,
He said it's for me.
Wishing he could hold me tight,
As tight as can be.
Talking to him now,
Will just have to due.
One day I'll see him,
He'll be mine,
Forever and through.
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A contest entry
- Long Distance Lovers by deleteduser.
700 points, ended April 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Long Distance Love by SomeonesToySoldier.
500 points, ended May 9, 2008, 22 entries
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[.♥.].Beautifully.Broken.[.♥.]
Comments
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wow that was amazing!
i am in love with this guy in PA
he is my best friend this just totally talks about us
it hits the spot in my heart
and im not gonna lie it made me trickle a tear
its amazing how you can read my emotions and not eve know it...that my friend is when you have a wonderfully written poem (:
*amber*
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You've covered will what a person goes through in a long distance realtionship. All the things that run through your head. Thank you for entering this in my contest and good luck.
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His smile is as fair,
As a gently(should be gentle) summer breeze
You show faith in what you are doing, but your journey has only begun. I pray that your love may be true and some day your forever and through shall come to be. Thanks for entering, DP
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