Through the painful tears
Streaming down my battered face
We stayed together
Through the darting eyes
Considering one night stands
We stayed strong in love
Through hopeless nightfalls
Cold and bitter to the touch
Our hearts were enraged
Through the months and years
Of good times and bad moments
We beat the distance
Author notes
Haiku chain
5-7-5
this is based off the picture
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- Long Distance Lovers by deleteduser.
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Powerful...I like this
lol
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This is really sweet..reminds me a lot of me and my boyfriends relationship..thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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this is a nice take on the pic. i def see the connection. thanks for the entry!
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This is unique to me, I've never seen a haiku chain before. I really like this poem and the struggles you speak of are genuine and true. Everyone struggles, but not everyone beats the distance. :
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This is touching, short but powerful.
Nice haiku.
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wow...this is very short yet sweet, sincere and very hopeful haiku chain...truly long distance lovers last if they 'stayed strong together' very captivating indeed!
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Fabulous haiku chain, I believe in long distance relationships since my husband and I made it work from USA & Australia
Wonderful write
Best of luck hun
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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wonderful haiku chain... i love the words we beat the distance... ALOT!
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