Now a real ladies man
in his lean, mean machine
made him feel young again
like he did at eighteen.
A real babe catcher
he thought, *I'm the man*
he decided to take it
and trade in his van.
Sucking his gut in
he grabbed the wheel
off he went cruising
in his hot babe mobile.
Going from 0.60
she hummed like a bird
it didn't matter
that he looked just absurd
Tossed to and fro
as he hit speed humps
he just smiled as he shifted
his adrenaline pumped.
The wind in his face
cops on his rear
he screamed -eat my dust
Casanova is here!
Author notes
Funny Pic Prompt II ( being able to post the pic with it makes all the difference-wish I could) sigh
A contest entry
- Funny Pic Prompt II by BuriedTreasures.
900 points, ended April 27, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Oh my this is so great. What a terrific take on the picture. Congrats on the silver.
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Thank you sir. I had too much fun doing this one lol The prompt was so funny.
We all need a good laugh now and then
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HaHa. I love it. It is funny and a tad barbed. It is really cute. Is that modeled after someone that you have told me about????
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How did you ever guess? lol Thanks my friend, you're so sweet!
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Excellent!
I enjoyed reading this--Great take on the Pic-
Well written & versed with good flow--and Especially. VERY FUNNY
--Welcome to the finalist List!
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Thank you for Silver. I had a blast doing this contest!
Linda
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Hey... I think is "friend bashing"... Oh, you didn't mean me (LOL). Funny, fresh, and frightfully close to the truth...
Ken
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If the shoe fits LOL just kidding. Thank you sweet soul for your comment!
Linda
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This is just so darn funny!!! I love this!!! I'm bookmarking so I can enjoy it more than once. The imagery is just so funny! Good luck in the contest.
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I just wish I could have posted the pic with it. lol It was too funny. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
Linda
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Oh my Goodness, what a read this one is! Sounds like you might have known my ex at one time
This is just plain fun! Great job on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Are you sure we didn't have the same ex then? lol Thank you sweetness for your always kind comments at my lame attempts at humor.
&love
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Well I would say probably not, but, my ex was a playboy he loved his women, and many of them at one time.... ugh.
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