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Enough...

Some days I feel like you are to good for me
and it makes me feel like I should be more
I know I hurt you sometimes, but you hurt me too.
Taking you for granted was never my intention,
Though it seems I do it all the same.
My feelings for you only intensify
and I don't want to chance losing you. 

So please forgive my attitude, and know that I try
and I will continue to for so long as you let me
Our future is in your hands my love
I give you my apology and my heart and trust
that you will make the right decision for us both
I don't ever want to be without you
It's killing me inside that I'm not enough

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  • alco
    April 13, 2008

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    Awesome poem! This is completely how I feel about my hubby, Rob. I feel like because of my mental illnesses I'm not good enough for him, and that bcuz I don't work and am on disability I'm not good enough for him, and bcuz we can't have children together, I'm not good enough for him. He loves my children as if they are his own, and they both love him likewise. But I feel like he deserves to be w/someone who he can have biological children with.
    Well, I guess we all have our demons.
    Take care and be safe my poet friend.
    ~Monica


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    wonderful write
    thanks so much for entering, and yeah it is sorta liek that
    but lovely write and good luck
    take care
    stephanie


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 13, 2008

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    this is really good. your words are very kind and not brutal. that is lovly. u write with a great flow!!! please check out my new poem called: the silver spoon and the plastic knife. it would make my day. thanks x