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Whitewashed Pot

He rants reasonably
in a calm, teaching tone
of "dirty spics" and "lazy niggers"
  invading our country
  stealing our jobs
  ruining our economy
  wasting our taxes
  trashing our neighborhoods
  abusing welfare.

"Well, no... 
they aren't ALL like that,"
he'll drawl when pressed.
"But it's not worth MY time
to sort one decent person
out of ninety-nine percent scum."

Illogical rationality
is always exhausting to refute
and I remain perplexed
at how efficiently he ignores
those echoes of "ignorant savage"
rebounding within our shared blood
when they carve through my eardrums
on serrated wings.

Author notes

it doesn't get more stereotypical than the mindset that allows for racism.

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  • Leanna-bean
    June 21

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    Yes this is pretty amazing and such a sad part of our world...Thank you so much for your entry and good luck!


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    So true!!!

    Sad but true...
    Great narrative, rhythm & flow...
    This piece makes a powerful & profound statement of all the ignorance & intolerance in this hate filled world of ours...
    Well penned, Well said, Well done!!!


  • whits end silver member
    May 16, 2008

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    This piece sends a very good and sad, but true message. Unfortunately there is a lot of ignorance in this world of ours. Great poem!


  • pangur ban
    April 16, 2008
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    The last 6 lines of the final stanza are very poignant. I've heard some people comment that racism is ignorance. But I have to think it's also fear and a lack of respect. This is a good poem. Clearly written and easily understood.

    Thank you,
    PB

    PS. Thank you for reading and posting feedback on my work (and for catching my typo).


  • Ealdwyne
    April 14, 2008
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    reminds me all to well of the people i grew up around. well done. a masterful write.

  • qrist
    April 14, 2008

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    i remember growing up and finding people like that in my life at some points. never wrote a poem about it, but now i dont have to because you took the words right outta my mouth


  • Sticky-Cleveland
    April 13, 2008
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    true

    this poem is of how people think in our world today and its not necesarily bad or good


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 13, 2008
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    Hey. very good. this shows how a man thinks of afro americans. well done.good luck


    • rhyana
      April 13, 2008
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      our own ancestry provides so many examples of it and yet people never seem to learn.

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