Like poison slowly seeping,
a mouth firmly stitched shut.
Infection gently bleeding in
from the lies that you strut.
Did you think I wouldn't notice,
the plague that you spread.
Each time your mouth opens,
it fills me with sheer dread.
Over the years I've endured,
deplorable words so untrue.
Now it's my turn to speak,
two words only 'Fuck You!'
Author notes
Prompt; Title - Fuck You
A contest entry
- Titles part 2(more titles being added) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 30, 2008, 31 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Possessive
First let me say, I am really intrigued by all of your writings. Although I may not always agree with what you have to say..it's fine because it's interesting to me to see it from a completely different perspective. This ensnared me so well, it almost drove me to tears. Felt like someone was pulling me in deeper & deeper, and then letting me go so fast that I was left dangling from a string. Broken away, yet .. still holding on tenderly.
I apologize for your vicious emotions. It really gave me a good idea of how hurt you truly were. .. & I wish that I could put a stop to it. <3
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wow lady
i love it..didn't know you had the words in you...lol
awesome....my fu lost..lol
congrats on the siver my friend
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DAMN YES!!!!! Wahooo... you go girl! That told 'em!
Totally have felt like that before and wanted to say those words accompanied by the two finger salute!
That was just awesome!!
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Emotions are blazing in this one!! I really like what you wrote. Good luck in this contest. This deserves a cup.
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ooo... Very powerful... Very disturbingly ugly - but, in a good way
Wonderfully written! I really love how powerful your words are... But, yet so dark and evil...
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WOW! FEEL THE HEAT! lol love this sissy for more reasons than one!!! My thoughts today...
you best to you in the contest ~Blessings always~ Trisha
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Brilliant!
I didn't think you could pull this one off. But, you did. Darling of the Dark, Mischevious Mistress of Mayhem and Duchess of Doom this is daring. You have outdone yourself. I'm still chuckling. Don't ever want to be that guy. Kudos to this poetess.
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Fabulous!
I am thoroughly impressed by this poem because it is so damn true and its just refreshing to hear you say it. Cant tell you I wanted to say this lately to certain people. Your poem not only flows but is really funny...what else can I say?
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Fuck you is probably what I would say to that to. Great rhyme.
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Love this!!!
Less is more...
Great imagery within the narrative...
Honest, blunt & to the point...
Way to channel that darkness...
Yet another great write...
Well done!!!
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I love this so much mommy.. I really do, I wish I could say this to someone.. I do have someone in mind to.
I can feel the anger through out this write. I really can and dam its really strong & quite powerful.
excellent job with the prompt.
good luck in the contest mommy
kat
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