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The Death of Gentle Beth

New to my care to save me they did not
Compassions away only to take me down once more
Temper flaring and hands too hot
Taken again, in I walk through another's door
When you didn't love me

I looked at my reflection, trying to see what you knew
In my eyes so deep in sorrow I got lost for no tomorrow
My heart stopped for just one moment to remember it true
Another day, in a new life I would tredge through
When you didn't love me

A name I had once but now I'm another
Night comes to prayer so to not forget
Nolonger a daughter, not a father nor mother
Wishing... my heart, that you'll hold some regret
When you didn't love me

Captive to lunacy, in fights I did grow
Running away falling deeper to death
Persisting... I resolve, reflecting on everything I know
Wounded in spirit, I died your gentle Beth
When you didn't love me

Your worth keeping safe and your worth someones love

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  • maralisa silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    name I had once but now I'm another
    Night comes to prayer so to not forget
    No longer a daughter, not a father nor mother
    Wishing... my heart, that you'll hold some regret
    When you didn't love me

    Captive to lunacy, in fights I did grow
    Running away falling deeper to death
    Persisting... I resolve, reflecting on everything I know
    Wounded in spirit, I died your gentle Beth
    When you didn't love me
    wow I can relate to your poem as it is so hard when your parents don't love you thank you for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 10, 2008

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    It is always one of the hardest things to be treated this way when you have done no wrong in life ... painful write that hits the heart


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda