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It Started with a Kiss

Bound and blindfolded, you are Mine,
nothing you can do but feel My lips on skin.
Moist kisses from your eyes to your toes,
claiming all that I own so deep within.

I can see your hunger moisten your love.
Tongue licks to pulsating heat,
Torment and teases, bringing whispered pleases,
not yet, I want to savour My treat.

Nipple rolled between tongue and teeth,
the shudder beneath tells me you enjoy this ride.
Fingers probe and open your heat,
cooling ice chills from very deep inside.

Penetrating deep to the core of Mine.
in darkness, intense reactions to every touch.
Each stronger than the one before,
closer to the precipice the next could be too much.

Trailing my tongue to your heat,
I inhale the aroma, and sense your greed.
Ice melted, lapping soft inside,
releasing you to the pleasure you need.

Can you feel My lust within?
Honey lips glisten, now for My desire.
My own precious chalice, Mine to sip
juices like wine, sending Me ever higher.

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Pic inspired write

 

For My angel,

 

love always baby, Mine

 

YLD 

 

xxx Jem xxx 

 

Photography: Unknown

 

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  • Tattboyspet
    April 22, 2008
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    oh my!
    this is filled with complete adoration and I KNOW That she feels the same way! to both of you! When I read things like this it sends shivers down my spine knowing that there are others out there that can love as deeply as i love my Master
    excellent Jem - truly amazing stuff here!!!!!


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 14, 2008

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    wow...
    this piece is definately one for the gentle eroticism and sensuality, never tried BDSM myself, hmmmmmmm qny takers? hehehe

    great one!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins


    • Corvus Corone
      April 14, 2008
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      BDSM has been part of my life for 25 years, forget the tales of chains and pain, its tender loving and absolutely beautiful... with the right person. Like in the non BDSM world if its the wrong person it has no meaning.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    Jem,

    I think this is now one of my new favs from you. I really liked the gentleness that emits from your words, all the while maintaining a certain degree of love, compassion and eroticy all rolled into one..BRAVO!

    **Master Ktulu**


    • Corvus Corone
      April 13, 2008
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      Thanks Bro, must confess this one wasn't the hardest write when angel is in my head. The thoughts just run naturally.


  • runewalker
    April 13, 2008

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    evocative

    you make submission sound enticing, albeit what a bond of trust it takes. this is delicious, and sensual. some claim the submissive is the one in control.


    • Corvus Corone
      April 13, 2008
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      And they claim right, if one practises SSC (safe sane and consensual) ultimately it is the submissive who sets the limits of any scene, however the dominant decides what occurs within those limits. It is indeed a deep trust bond both ways. Thank you for your comment.


      • runewalker
        April 13, 2008
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        thank you for responding

        I would have a difficult time subbing. Here is a dom/sub early in their dance:

        http://allpoetry.com/poem/4121611

        • Corvus Corone
          April 13, 2008
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          I can't sub either, the golden rule is do what suits you.


          • runewalker
            April 13, 2008
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            thanks for teaching.

            thanks for teaching. the forces are there, but the rules unclear. Chasing surges without reins seizes shocks. you hint at how.


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 13, 2008

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    Fanx You Jems m'Lady

    this is awsome ... me is come ova all tingly... i love You so much

    xxx Your angel xxx


    • Corvus Corone
      April 13, 2008
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      Hunny you were meant to come over tingly... grins

      I love you Mine

      YLD

      xxxJemxxx

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