Wings stretched for tomorrow is here
Eyes fixed in the horizons unknown
Anticipation quickens the anxious heart
Dreams and best wishes point the way
May the skies welcome new flight
May the world's love flood your soul
May your eyes see in fresh ways
May your heart beat compassion and innocence
The dreams and hopes of those who love you are many
Carry them into this new life, for they are your weapons
Use them to cross rivers of doubt, and caverns of hate
Spread the greatness others see in you to shield the way
May all that is good find it's way to you
Author notes
Pic credit:http://alectorfencer.deviantart.com/art/Nahawen-82621642
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Very wonderful!
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Simply beautiful...Only thing I disagreed with was this: "May the world's love flood your soul". I just don't see the "world" overall as a 'loving' kind. But I get the idea.
Great write as usual from you. How could I expect anything less than marvellous?
~Inc."
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Well done!
You learn fast, grasshopper.
It is a very beautiful prayer poem.
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I loved the imagery here and this poem is simply beautiful. It flowed with a sort of gracefulness. This poem in my opinion should get something if not the gold.
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This was so sweet and beautiful.. It really flowed with emotion and good wishes.. well done!!.. I really enjoyed reading this! best of luck to you..
Jetleena
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THis was awsome! I really like the picture too and your words are very expressive!!
~Ocean~
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wow very good
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Vivid imagery here my friend.
thank you so much for always sharing such creativity within your words.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Hi Joe!
I like this. You might want to catch the typos: unknown, quickens, compassion, innocence, doubt and shield. I like the look. Good luck with it.
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Thanks for taking a look at it.
I sure misspell lots of words when I'm in a hurry.
( and almost as many when I'm not)
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