echo...echo...Echo...Echo...
beep...beep...Beep...BEEP!
Set, mark
target caught.
Ouch!
We've been heard!
1982
He's too young yet.
Overhead we flashed him
and his little sis
he knows, he told her to duck!
1992
He's ok ya know?
He shared his dillpickle juice
with us.
2002
He's so cute!
Do ya think he bought
the tye-dye mutt
act?
Nah... he knew
why do ya think he writes
of us?
He wished for a planet
full of females way back when
while young.
Haha...
what a nut
changed his mind since then.
Oh well I guess we'll have to leave
him with his pen and imagination.
With raving laughter the honey bunnies
cloaked thier buggy bubble
spaced away with popping power
starshine
leaving behind the greasy scent
of french fries.
Passing *StarChild*
left on high.
She has her eye on these two
letting no alien space bunnies
mess with her dad.
She knows what he is meant
to do
It does not include them.
Author notes
They know me, they just don't want me.
I've heard them, I've seen them in flight. Nobody believes me that's ok. My tombstone will read "I told ya so"
A contest entry
- ALIENS! by aaaaaaaa.
650 points, ended April 27, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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this is interesting, I'll have to read it again to really take it all in. thanks for entering and good luck
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OK...you got me
This is interesting. For me, an interesting piece. Good imagery. A bit of imagination soup. Plus, mystery-to-boot. ha.ha. One of my favorite passtimes (alien stuff...lol). Great job. I love this part, "My tombstone will read "I told ya so" "...lol. That sure sounds familiar.
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I wrote a book called
Star kids: the chosen...available for download on Lulu.com
Write on!
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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wanna hear something funny?
starchild is a name I picked for myself back when I was growing up! l.o.l. I thought it was so cool haha, never knew I'd be reading it in a poem many years later, and with a reference to aliens! good story, and let em all eat crow when they find out you were right! l.o.l.!
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