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a lover [not a poem... for ea's contest]

lime juice
handcuffs
riding crop
ferrero rocher chocolates
snakes
anais nin books
a heavy green-and-black duvet
nine inch nails music
the movie 'fight club'
a cherrywood desk
margaritas made with grenadine and lime juice
white orchids

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  • Judith Chandler
    April 15, 2008

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    Go for the anais nin books but I like cherrywood desk and white orchids too. It's a great list, full of evocative imagery.
    jjj

  • DyeBieFyre
    April 13, 2008

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    I'll have to stick with my boys in NiN (Nine Inch Nails). Somehow, I think you were listening to more "Closer" than "Hurt".


  • celticwarrior
    April 13, 2008
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    My daughter introduced me to Fight Club -- I avoided it until then; now it's one of my favs.


  • Dienush
    April 13, 2008

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    wowowow this list speaks to me SO much. I think I'll say, "margaritas made with grenadine and lime juice". Love the idea and how specific and intimate it gets, though the way you phrased it seems a bit clumsy for poetry. Lovely idea(s).


  • hoodoolover silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    The crop for sure


  • Lj-
    April 13, 2008
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    Nine inch nails music
    because I can relate to it most
    or "Fight Club"
    because I love the book.



  • KayJay
    April 13, 2008

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    The riding crop... a symbol of control, a source of pain and pleasure, and the start of a wonderful poem...
    Ken


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    cherrywood desk.....such a pretty piece...


    Lynda


  • azure85 gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    A cherrywood desk, I love that wood and have always wanted a dining room table made of cherrywood.


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Give me the margarita...I have never tried one!


  • ea silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    I say a heavy green-and-black duvet because that suits my tastes. Something you could get rowdy under.


  • just mercedes gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    OK, handcuffs please. They feature in a favourite fantasy...


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Oh the riding crop every time!

    And if ye kent me weel, ye'd ken how, but I'm no' saying wan wee wordie!

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