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Heart of a ...?

Surviving scandal, plots, her father's ploys

And sister's doubts, young Bess won through to reign,

Discarding fears (as they were broken toys!)

Of treason, Scottish queen, the Pope and Spain.

 

"I have the heart and stomach of a King!",

She told her troops, defying the Armada.

Yes, martial valour is a splendid thing...

But once she met a challenge far, far harder!

 

For when that mouse skittered across the floor

Her "male" heart quaked as "feeble woman's" ought,

And Gloriana, though long past three score,

Flashing her smart silk stockings at the court,

 

Terrified (for with truth I shall not palter!)

Leapt skyward in one last tremendous Volta!

Author notes

I feel sure that most Allpoetry readers will recognize the quotation from Elizabeth I''s speech to her troops at Tilbury (1588):

"I may have the body of a weak and feeble woman, but I have the heart and stomach of a king - and a king of England, too!"

I do not know any written source for tht incident describes in this poem - it seems to have been handed down in the Nottingham lace industry. My grandfather (born in Nottingham, the grandson of an Irish lacemaker who moved to Nottingham during the Great Famine) used to say that it is what lies behind the nursery rhyme "Pussy-cat, pussy-cat where have you been?"


For readers somewhat unfamiliar with the social history of 16th century England:

in 1597, Queen Elizabeth I granted a patent (in effect a monopoly) to a Nottingham hosier who had developed a new device for knitting silk stockings - on condition he kept her well supplied with them for life (gratis, of course!). His device was later adapted to lace-making... hence the Nottingham lace-industry.

"La Volta" (dance - not poetic device!) came to England in - I think - the 1520's - and involved the women dancers in high leaps (in which their male partners supported them). Old-fashioned people (and in particular, the clergy - but they would, wouldn't they!)considered it shocking... but it was a favourite dance of Anne Boleyn (Elizabeth's mother) - and, indeed, of Elizabeth's father, Henry VIII, until he grew too fat and old to dance. Elizabeth would have danced it in her youth (I have recently seen a picture that some experts think is of Elizabeth and her favourite Robert Dudley,earl of Leicester, dancing the Volta), but by the late 1590s, the setting of this poem, it was somewhat out of fashion!

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  • epitome
    September 27

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.
    I recently read "The Queen's Fool", which follows Queen Mary and how Elizabeth eventually ascends the throne, it's by Phillipa Gregory and while it isn't likely to be historically accurate, it's an excellent read.

    this poem is brilliant, if you get a chance, enter it in my history contest under the Henry era, it's less likely to get overlooked as it may in the masses of poems I have here.


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 19
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    I enjoyed this poem, and the image of the dance it evoked. The rhyme in the volte made me giggle for some reason.


  • Keith
    August 17

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    Wonderful. A great mix of the modern, liberated woman and the "feeble woman" of the past. You've totally got me on the history: I could never master dates - except those which came in a box at Christmas. Funny and gently ironic at the same time.
    Any advice on how ah'm gonnae judge this?


  • XxNinjaNemoxX
    August 8
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    Lol I like it
    It's funny
    Thanks for entering and best of luck
    xoxo.


  • knitonepearlone
    September 7, 2008

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    This is an amusing anecdote which gives an iinteresting insight into the vulnerability of the mighty queen. Great poem! Good luck in the contest.


  • Olivias Violin
    September 5, 2008
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    Well written, and funny
    Thank you for sharing this poem.

  • Judith Chandler
    July 25, 2008
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    Well done. I really enjoyed it.


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 25, 2008

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    Interesting piece I might say. Very well structured throughout, I liked the rhyme scheme, the humour invoved within is a good approach and I liked the concept of the poem overall. Great write!! Good luck in my contest

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Silver Asylum
    July 14, 2008

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    Spiffy

    I like the third line of the poem particularly, but overall, even, the poem is wonderful. I actually learned something (as I had absolutely no idea about La Volta or the lace making industry) which was great. And I love how well you were able to portray the feelings of fear, joy, and courage she must've felt, and how strong she had to be, no matter what. Excellent write and good luck!!

    ~*~Silent Insanity

    ****

    "My Lords, do whatever you wish. As for me, I shall do no otherwise than pleases me."
    -Queen Elizabeth I


  • Fire-Fly
    June 27, 2008
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    Excellent write.

    Well done and good luck in my contest.


  • only1love4ever
    April 15, 2008
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    Wow, that is a great poem, I just love how its based upon the kings, queens, and popes and you brought them into the future. Great poem Vera Rich!! Thank you for sharing!! ~Love always, Only1love4ever


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    Very good indeed. I like things which show chinks in historical armour, even the armour of people I admire - it makes them more human. And I like this poem - I hope Jeff considers it to be far enough removed from a sonnet to stand in the contest. If he quibbles, refer him to me, and I'll persuade him.


  • MargaretG
    April 13, 2008
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    That is a funny story; I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest!

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