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Hidden~Universe

Cosmos parts it's axis
tabu black holes
journeyed to embrace
finger prints
left forever
on hidden DNA

Universe she
holds star dust
in milkyway of gold
a sprinkling sifts
the soul as
nerve tips rise

Nebulas draw near
karma trickles
from waiting lips
a kiss of lovers
to ingest
insatiable silkiness

Molten earth speaks
nature's instinct
we dance
we muse
blanket sighs
heavenly cries


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Picture Credit: Erotic Muse by wingnfree (http://photobucket.com/wingnfree/6b0e2a13c6.jpg)

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  • KayJay
    April 16, 2008

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    Very sensual and emotionally compelling in your word choice and the images you portray... I think you've captured a nice take on the picture...

    I'll reserve final judgement for Friday but wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your entry.
    Ken