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Heart Astrewn

Golden wings and heart astrewn
My love for you is at full bloom
Watching you fall down heaven for me
Makes me fear and want to bleed
I hate and conflict with your master
Knowing this will all lead to disaster
But loving you heats my soul
More than satan could give in full blow
Waiting for the time I need to cry
Feeling the tears on my face dry
You coming here for me
Why i cannot begin to see

If this is how I need to go
I will leave heaven for your love
My passion, undying holds nothing of above
You are my life,
my desire,
my purpose!
If I lose you what will happen no one knows
My wings are gone and my soul with them
I wish I would not be condemned
but you are who I am
I cannot be without you
for you are the last place I will ever fly
I love you
And to heaven I will say Goodbye.


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  • 0darkAngel0
    April 16, 2008
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    well penned...
    good luck


  • nuttynettles
    April 13, 2008

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    very very nice, there was nothing more you could add.
    it was written perfectly. you did a very good job on this.
    good luck in the contest1!
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