i knew a man,
threw stones at birds
i asked him why
he said,
bastards fly too high
A contest entry
- The Downfall of Humankind by elmundopasa1.
600 points, ended April 15, 2008, 18 entries
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Congratulations on the Bronze Cups!!
I like the thoughts of one of your fans, below: "We all have a bit of bird envy..." Of course, that's why we learned to fly ourselves!!! 
Great write!!! 
Peace always, Cyn xx 
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Amazing.
You are able to make a very powerful piece, without it being very long at all. I envy you. -
Applaudes from the somewhere at the front of the auditorium, than does a handstand.
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I like this...rough around the edges...testosterone injected poetry, lol.
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lmao Oh... We all have a bit of bird envy...
Great job and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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This is one of those poems you read and say, "Wow!"..then you read it again, and are speechless. Congratulations on the Bronze.
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ha ha
funny write for the prompt . . liked "threw stones at birds" and "bastards fly too high" . . typical for a jerk !! -
very interesting. it seems so simplistic, yet so much meaning behind the words and playing off the common "kill to birds with one stone" i believe as well. very well done. thanks for entering.
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