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Some use much wind and their words are empty,

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Some use less wind and their words are powerful.

 

 

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  • wordsmith gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    After reading your poetry it is clear that you are one whose few words are powerful.


    • freespirit51 gold member
      September 27, 2008
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      wordsmith

      Thanks so much for your generous comment. It was something that came to me in the night.

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    doesn't take many words to speak the truth to fill a heart with tenderness...for like the wind they can either leave a lasting impression are just fade into nothingness...I do love your mind dear sister


  • Ithica silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    You speak with the wisdom of a sage... You do your spirit body proud!!! I'm thinkin' a Zen master would also approve!!! hehe!


    • freespirit51 gold member
      April 23, 2008
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      Ithica

      Thanks so much for your very kind words. These are words that came to me one night while I was saying and I had to write them down so I could sleep. Glad they touched you.


  • arafura
    April 13, 2008
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    A lot said in a few words my friend. Much wisdom!

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