Words
tripped
over affections;
relaxing the heart
to a promise
as pinky's crossed
hands shook
and a kiss
swore
our love,
true.
But bitter poison
fills my lunges
taking sips
of sweetness
when in lies,
the sin.
I hand thee my heart
but words never swore,
to live.
Author notes
I Never Promised
A contest entry
- Titles part 2(more titles being added) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 30, 2008, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Amazing
This is awesome!!! wow your a really talented writer.
I love how you take such simple words and put them together to creat such a wonderful and creative piece.and one more thing... the details are amazing and i can relate to this in a way. its awesom!! -
amazing work. I really enjoyed reading such an amazing poem. keep up the great work.
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Aw, this is so sweet and somewhat sad at the same time hun, loved this, and best of luck in the contest.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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