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Dyslexic

you have danced with my reflection
while intercepted souls at midnight
thrown into upheaval
slithered serpentine like
belly crawling

flirted with disaster
and delivered resolution
situation dire

and you have written me a story
that is seldom heard
with insight so involved
that i'm dyslexic

Author notes

Inspired as a result of reading "Slow Like Silk"...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4120347
by Night Hope

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  • Tam
    April 15, 2008

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    damn Tim...

    you've been a busy feller...and slinging some powerful ink indeed...
    this is excellent!
    and Wanda is such an amazing poet it would require extraordinary skill to sling something this grand in her wake...
    great job!
    even today you still can surprise me...this is wonderful!
    xoxoxo


  • cheaphotelsign
    April 13, 2008

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    wow...this is a trip. a definate product of inspiration...enjoyed this ride...i mean read. read like a ride.lol totally dig the last stanza..you're so good.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Jeepers, Poet. Very cool. Thanks for the nod. Wanda