you have danced with my reflection
while intercepted souls at midnight
thrown into upheaval
slithered serpentine like
belly crawling
flirted with disaster
and delivered resolution
situation dire
and you have written me a story
that is seldom heard
with insight so involved
that i'm dyslexic
Author notes
Inspired as a result of reading "Slow Like Silk"...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4120347
by Night Hope
In a list
A contest entry
- Pre-write-a-pal-ooza by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 8, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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damn Tim...
you've been a busy feller...and slinging some powerful ink indeed...
this is excellent!
and Wanda is such an amazing poet it would require extraordinary skill to sling something this grand in her wake...
great job!
even today you still can surprise me...this is wonderful!
xoxoxo

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wow...this is a trip. a definate product of inspiration...enjoyed this ride...i mean read. read like a ride.lol totally dig the last stanza..you're so good.


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Jeepers, Poet. Very cool.
Thanks for the nod.
Wanda





