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too much and not enough

I wish I could want you
to be with you
to need you
But I can't.
I can only love you,
But that is not enough
I wish you could take me as I am.
I love you for who you are-
I wish I could explain it.
But I can't.
I can only love you,
But that is not enough.
I wish we could wait awhile,
be friends
just lovers
But you wont.
You will only love me more
And that is just too much.

too much
and
not enough...
my love, forgive me

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  • darkstinger
    April 13, 2008

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    Tiffany, that is really good. Your poems just keep getting more and more to the point of how you feel. Keep it up.

    Ray


  • starrynight3636
    April 12, 2008

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    Sorry, this is just too complicated for me.
    You know what you want, so go for it.
    Cliches are cliches for a reason: enjoy being together and let nature take its course. If it doesn't work out, it wasn't meant to be.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    wow
    this goes back and forth more than a fly swatter in the summer... 0.o lol
    wonderful emotion write
    and thanks so much for the entry
    good luck
    take care
    stephanie