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Good Things Come in Three?

Now you say you really think, that good things come in three,
I'm sorry if I sink your boat, but I sadly dissagree...

I'm not sure if you'll listen, but I hope you do some more...

When I tell you, "Truly my friends, GREAT things come in FOUR..."

Author notes

This was written specifically for the contest, "Good things come in Three." If the maker of the contest reads this, I didn't write this just to be different. I wanted to show you that 4 is better than 3, and I hope I "wow-ed" you with my 4 lines. (3 lines is "I love you," but 4 lines is, "I love you too," So I believe 4 is better...

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  • infernalxfidelity
    April 23, 2008

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    nice. i like this. i also like your reasoning in the author notes. three can be good or evil. but four was never really given a side.

    anyway, good poem. keep writing.

    ~jules


  • Deathless1
    April 15, 2008

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    it was cute, but bad things happen in threes.
    i like it alot though and it was a sweet write.
    KNIGHT TIME


  • sheltered
    April 13, 2008
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    Nice job of stepping out.
    Let's hope great things come in infite numbers.


  • nikkia
    April 13, 2008

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    this is quite unique and i like the rhyming, it reads well. thanks so much for the entry and good luck in the contest