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Missing You

So now you've gone
Every day I think of you
Reaching out with my mind
Always missing you
Please never forget me
Here in my heart you'll never go
In this lonely place
All I can do, is think of you
Love unspoken to you my brother

Realizing you'll never come back
Oh my brother, friend
Believe and don't doubt my words
Everyday I miss your presence
Remember me in your silence
That I cared about you

Wishing I could tell you
Always regretting never speaking
These words that I know are true
Every night your protection is gone
Removed from this lonely place
Seeing nothing of worth in this town

Dark half of my soul
A piece of me left with you
Seraphial of the night

Venom and antidote
Absolute and willing to learn
My dark self, your own life
Please remember your sister
In the darkness that we both share
Remember me
Ever with me, perhaps forever gone

Author notes

I wrote this because someone I consider to be my brother and the dark half of my soul has left the area he lived in to find a better job. I know he's happy where he is but I miss having him around. You never realize your feelings for a sibling until they leave you.
So yah, I just miss him....alot.

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Comments


  • LillianEmrys
    April 13
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    Beautifully written


  • evilbatwoman
    April 12

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    This is sad. It makes me miss your brother too, even though I've never met him. At least he isn't gone forever really. He might not be around in person. It's sad to see someone you feel like that for leave though.
    Nice write