this night is perfect
lights flashed
music played
girls gossiped:
slowely driving knife by knife into each others backs
boys are just ammo in such vicious fights
they were just reasons,
excuses
drinking shot glasses filled with poison
all allignments quickly disappeared
blades ready to be stabbed in faces
tears rolling;
like blood dripping from a wound
the stars are gone.
its all we've got
words play across mouths
glances that can freeze movement
this isnt life;
its highschool
Author notes
well. i know this sucks. but this is school. not just my school, but every school.
girls are bitches
and to all the superficial girls, boys mean nothing.
this is loosely based on a fight i had with the FAKEST person you will ever meet.
although we didnt admit it, it was about a boy.
the thing is.
i liked him imensely
and she was just using him to hurt me.
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Comments
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Thanks for the entry! This had some really strong emotion in it. The title really caught my attention though, hehe.
'slowly driving knife by knife into each others backs' - I thought you could change the word by to after because I think it makes more sense. I would like to read a poem just based on that last line,
this isn't life;
its high school.- because that line really spoke to me,so heck write a poem based on that and put it in here (lol you don't really have to just a suggestion). Really enjoyed reading your take on high school and plastic society.
Thanks for the entry & good luck!
Sorath -
well i thought that the title was a bit to dramatic..but i must agree this is how High School really is. People in general are plastics and High School will never end because in a world like this people will always be their immature selves even if they are 45.
Thank you for entering and Good Luck
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~ -
this is a great write =)
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I hate girls like that. I'm glad you're real, and not trapped in the world of plastic. Girls are bitches, they like to fight over anything superficial that they can find.
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