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Where the Heart Bends

To find love's feather in life

is to try and catch it

while the wind floats it towards the sky,

it becomes an obsession to hold,

stumbling and falling at times,

wondering if it is really worth the chase.

 

Then it falls into the hands,

which stroke your insides with its passionate plume,

bringing sensations of pleasure and pain,

mixed in agonize combinations,

but touching unlike anything else imaginable.

 

Mind falls into a hole of confusion,

until one can't see the past or future,

but is no longer alone

because the one who sees your beauty

in any darkness

willingly sits in the same chaos

so as to not be separated from your life again.

 

Never does it become heaven

though paradise does kiss the moment

along with purgatory.

 

Happiness becomes being a yo-yo

unable to stop moving

between the highs and lows

where the heart bends.

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  • islekine gold member
    April 13, 2008
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    Beautifully penned!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    *PEACE*


  • starrynight3636
    April 12, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem. I love the title and its repetition for the ending line brings everything together
    in a satisfying conclusion.

  • Amarige
    April 12, 2008

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    Wow fantastic piece daddy..so true when it comes to love..up and downs are normal with everything in this life..we just hope for the best from everything..very heartfelt
    Ruby


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 12, 2008
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    aww wow!
    this is wow!
    wonderful and so beautifuly written and metaphoric, aww thanks for entering, i enjoyed the write
    and this is so true with him and i
    but it feels like he is sick of sitting in the caos with me
    *sniffels*
    sigh..
    thansk for your entry and good luck
    take care
    stephanie