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emptiness

You were my strength when life became too much,
no matter how bad I felt my spirits lifted with just one touch,
you inspired me greatly,
but emptiness eats at me lately,
I'm not gonna stop caring cause that's just who I am,
guess you never felt I was worthy to remain your friend.

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  • nirmal
    June 19, 2008

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    what made you write this poem... Were you hurt. How can anyone feel that you are not worthy to be their friend... maybe you would have misunderstood. Everyone wants to be Tracey's Friend.. :-)


    • angel-lover
      June 21, 2008
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      thank-you Nirmal yes i wrote this as i was feeling a little sad about some-one but that was a while ago now thanks for your awesome comment take care sweetie.