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Owyhee River Canyon

 

The yellow, and oranges, pinks, and red, shimmered
off rocky canyons into the cool rushing water.

And the bluest of sky penetrated its perfection,
making it the most stunning spectacle in nature.

I would almost go as far as to say, that it might
have been created by the hand of God himself.

It is in these waters that grandpa was at his happiest,
and the place where as a kid I was taught to fish.

Such memories I do recall along these banks of the river,
laughter, cursing, the stories of the one that got away.

But I prefer to remember his infectious smile, and warming grace,
and I think of him often, fishing free in this heavenly place.

 

 

In memory of Warren Eugene Cleaver

 

1/4/23 - 9/25/88

 

 

 

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Artist:Mary J. Maxam "Line Dance"

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    February 21

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    this is moving!

    I wanted to read more, so well done my friend,
    your imagery is so remarkable, i hear the tree's rustle and the river rushing.. Beautiful!! you described a little piece of heaven with your grandfather , well done my poet friend

    Rend


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    February 17

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    Truly a touching memory of the man that made the greatest impression on a young life. These are treasured that "don't get away" like the fish did. Much love and happy thoughts to you. Thank you for sharing that with me. Sandy


  • NeonRose
    April 24, 2008

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    A truly beautiful tribute, and a marvelous response to this prompt! Congratulations on your Gold trophy!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    Oh I am so pleased to see a tribute in this contest. Truely a beautiful piece. and great dedication. this picture reminded me of loved ones as well. Thank you for this entry in my contest.


    Delila


  • penman gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Excellent

    So very well crafted. The images truly very memorable and a great tribute to your grandfather. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 22, 2008

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    Beautiful dedication to your grandfather. Amazing when they say a picture is worth a thousand words...and your poem captured your Grandpa perfectly...best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • PerfectImperfection
    April 17, 2008

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    A very well composed piece of thought you have penned within these lines. Nice attention to detail in reflection of such cherished moments. Nicely done!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    Beautifully heartwarming. Wonderful images presented to this prompt, yet need none to make your message clear. There are memories that make us smile and then, there are memories that MAKE us.
    Wonderfully nostalgic. ~Pamela


  • Desire gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Now this is a Beautiful verse You have penned

    Beautiful dedication and for some reason...when I was reading this I kept seeing Koi~
    Koi fish (looked like Koi from my perception)
    -sorry...I don't know my fish
    and shown closeup of their colors...
    Your words swells the eyes

    It is in these waters that grandpa was at his happiest,
    and the place where as a kid I was taught to fish.
    These lines grabbed...

    Magnificent take on the picture prompt
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Three Doves
    April 15, 2008

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    A Fantastic Write! A treasured memory deep within the heart. Thank you for sharing the experienec.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah

  • imahealer
    April 13, 2008

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    Such a beautiful memory of your grandfather. IT's such a pleasure to read a poem of someone whose life you celebrate. I loved your version of the prompt. Fly fishing is really a challenge. I have tried it once. Never caught a thing---but in Canada, where my mom had a home on the Rideau Canal system, I learned to fish for lake bass, by using live froggies. That was a real trip. My mom is gone now, but I still see her smiling the day I caught the first fish, and almost tipped the canoe! Best wishes with your wonderful poem!

    Shana


  • KayJay
    April 13, 2008

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    Wonderful interpretation of the prompt. Thank you for sharing your memories... Good luck in the contest.
    Ken


  • natchstucco
    April 13, 2008

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    Interesting that you chose the last stanza only to rhymne. I don't think I even need the painting to get the image you are painting so vividly in this script. well done and good luck.

  • Bob Fox
    April 12, 2008

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    Tony

    The canvas your paint with this wonderful piece that speaks of memories always tender is one of your best I think. Writeon my friend


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 12, 2008

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    many hugs my dear one as the memories alone bring forth a kaleidescope of thought and promise on a clear Autumn day remembering the days of yonder. well done and many loving blessings always xxxx

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 12, 2008
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    I really like this goodluck in her contest much love always

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