Exhaustion; waiting endless night
for a word, just one,
hoping for the moment,
a connection.
in a single instant of introspection
I realise...
...the mindless idiocy of love
hurts...
is it {enough} for me?
Author notes
I know you do steff...but tonight this is me...so sorry...
Simon
A contest entry
- Enough? (pif) by luna-midnight.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Incredible
Another stroking of master piece poetry in the making as your fluidity of words were superior compared to many others I have read tonight & your over all quality is a real bonus too. any ways excellent work all round and really loving every poem I have rea dof yours. keep up the great work
good luck with the contest
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If it hurts that much, then it is not love. Love takes no prisoners, nor does it make one feel bad. Never settle for anything less than the real thing. Your words are painfully sad. Need a shoulder?
Shana
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Love does hurt at times
The hope for that call, message or text that fails to come in..
You sure have shown this in a deep and sad way
and good luck
Julie
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wow this is amazing.. . very familiar.
best of luck, this would be gold for me.
Tasha
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Wow bro.. that says a lot!! I've had those feelings before that's for sure. But I don't think love should hurt so much.. if it does, then it's the wrong love don't you reckon?
Perfect for the comp.. I hope she sorts it out
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know i do what?
is you?
huh, im confused...sigh
anyway back to the poem
i really love that poem..
i admit i have to look at this prescpective, but i love him and therefore i think i have to put up with it, but it hurts so much
sigh.
i really love your poem, its veyr emotional, thanks for the entry and good luck
stephanie *hugs*
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