All my life, I've been put down
I guess I start believing, myself
In all these things that others say
So do you wonder why I won't lay?
Please forgive me, I don't feel right
I haven't a hope to keep you with me
Inadequacy plagues me around you today
So why do you wonder at the things that I say?
Just try to understand
That I don't feel worthy
Because this love you give me
Is something I feel I don't deserve
Author notes
This is how I felt when I was going out with my girlfriend. I hope maybe this helps.
And like I said, good luck with things.
A contest entry
- Enough? (pif) by luna-midnight.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I connect with this very so.
I think it holds true in everyones lives,
even if they see it or not.
I love this poem very much. =]
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thanks.
and thanks for your entry
i hope things are better for you, and hey im sure you deserved her love! *hugs*
thanks
good luck
stephanie -
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Well, even though we're broken up now (thanks to me), we're still friends...even though she's gone out with two of my best friends.
Oh, and *returns hug* -
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yeah.
*hugs*
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