Another glass
And twice the pour
Three soft words
For the garnished score
A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute! very well said... so profound


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Wanted to read your first poem! Its good! Love the way you used garnished!


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haha, my first poem and first contest entry! wasnt quite sure what to expect
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You done well!!
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A profound little verse used with such depth and creativity... x
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