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Misfitted Magnets

I was drawn to him like a magnet
In a way that just didn't quite fit

It wasn't like family,
Friends, boyfriends, anything

I just always wanted to talk to him
And I dreamed of meeting him
Even though I knew I never would

Every spare moment I would think about him
We were friends in the most
Perfect sort of way

But of course, it wasn't quite perfect
No matter how much I was magnetized to him
It just didn't quite fit, it wasn't right

So it had to end


Author notes

I chose the quote,
"He and I had something beautiful
but so dysfunctional it couldn't last"
- 'Near to You' by A Fine Frenzy

This was also based on something that happened a year ago...online (big hint there, to any of you who are wondering). I'm not sure if this is about the quote enough, but I did my best ^.^

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Comments

  • This definitely has potential, it just needs a little more pizz-azz or something to make it livelier. The ending fit, but it could've been a little longer. But that's just my opinion. Thank you for entering, and good luck
    Jeanette*~