Hopping through the forest,
I nibble on some leaves.
Can Feel the enemy close,
Like its breath upon my neck.
The brook drowns the noises,
Of the kill to come;
Birds singing the dawn chorus,
Just thinking my mind calm.
I hop a little more,
To my favourite brush.
The smell of fragrant flowers,
Masking the enemys' scent.
It all happened so fast,
I don't know how,
He lept out onto me,
Sinking his sharp teeth into my neck.
I was almost dead instantly,
Feeling him eat me alive.
Left to decompose and rot,
My blood soaking the forest floor.
For the hunt is never over,
It will come again tomorrow,
To terrorize my family,
And anything to come.
Author notes
Just from the bunny's point of view. Thought that it would be different. Hope you enjoyed reading it!!! Please, read the hunter first, otherwise you won't understand it truly. But yet, you might.
How do you think that I can improve? What was your first emotional response?
Comments
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The circle of life!!! Not exactly a pretty thing but a most necessary one!! Well done......and I guess I need to read The Hunter now
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Great write!
This would have gone well in my contest too!
Is it a conclusion to the hunter or did you just do both points of views as in one being the rabbit and the other being the predator?
Anyway well done, you know how to use your description, it's always good.
Love and light.
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Dead bunnys, Not a happy thought!
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