Shattered dreams beyond belief
sitting on the edge of no soul
Black Angel Wings reflecting
on her shadow on the water
Tattered life strings broken
pleading her bitter circumstances
Black Angel Wings screaming
"I know I have done wrong."
Increased anxiety highly strung
sinking heart full of sorrow
Black Angel Wings regretting
her fate she was doomed to.
Promised heart ripped apart
flowing tears scattered around
Black Angel Wings resigining
her soul was lost and empty,
all alone.
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt by Hope Angel.
475 points, ended May 12, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this make you feel and can you relate to this
Comments
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This is intense but good. I like the imagary. Thanks for entering and being patient.
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Being able to write dark is a hard thing to do if its not something you do all the time. But this is quite good, personally though the word choice really is a little too cliche.
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Soulful
Darkly beautiful. You can feel the sorrow and regret as the darkness fills her soul... Very nice.
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