WITNESS MY FURY
No more shall you hurt me,
Trespass over me and my dignity.
No more will you mock me
For now the flames of my raging fury
Shall torment you forever!
Ever heard of “torturing to insanity”?
Oh well,
You will know it anyway!
You think you are better than me,
More knowledgeable, more bright,
Well you can forget that now,
You can wish you never crossed my path,
Wish I were a mere nightmare,
But all your wishes will be petty ashes.
I am real!
And the pain I will cause you
Will be too real!
I will make your life a living-hell,
Draw you out of the crowd,
Humiliate you, like you did me;
Agony and misery will be your food and drink,
Torture will be your daily routine.
Your suffering will be my utmost pleasure!
I will be everywhere and in everything
You see, hear, feel, eat, drink and even dream and breathe!
My fury will bind you, burn you,
And when you scream
No one will care, no one will bother.
Your cries will be sucked into oblivion
And forgotten forever!
You think I lie?
That I am not up to my word?
TRY ME!!
I will writhe every single hope out of you.
Your life and your sleep will be an ever-lasting agony!
The pain, the torture,
The misery, the excruciation
That I will inflict upon you
Will be the most devastating,
The most destructive,
The most wrecking,
The most obliterating of all!!
I will haunt your dreams,
Spoil your joy,
Annihilate all your hope,
I will shatter your very existence!
Death would be your saviour,
Your refuge, your relief,
But I will never kill you,
NEVER!
I will torture you till your brain boils,
Till your heart explodes,
Till your soul fades,
And your sanity will be lost
Forever!
You will be a living corpse,
A vampire would have more feeling,
Would know passion
As opposed to you!
Oh, the living-hell
I will put you through,
Death will be a paradise lost
Never to be regained.
Life will be an excruciating
And ever-lasting inferno!
And I,
I am the one to do it ALL!!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
Written for dear Dr. Shahira- my damned practical criticism prof. if she can be called that for she sure as hell knows nothing of criticism and has made my life HELL. She should thank GOD I didn’t burst in her face today or before.. but I guess what’s holding me back is the 5 marks year’s work which I doubt I’ll get coz she literally HATES ME!!
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A contest entry
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500 points, ended July 3, 2008, 12 entries
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Wow your poem is very chilling. I really love it. I can tell that you hate this person very much. I really hope you do wonderful in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
P.S.-Love how you expressed your hate toward that professor.
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This is a strong poem, but it breaks my nothing over fifty lines rule. To be fair to the others, I have to DQ. Thanks for the read though.
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Wow, so much hate in this poem! It's brilliant, a truly talented write. Thank you for entering and good luck
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Ohh Dear, I do hope that prof is still alive, if only because I hear prison is a horrible place to be.
A verrry good write though, thus the gold trophy I believe, very expressive and the reader could feel the hate and murderous intend coming between the lines.
Great write, keep it up, and I hope you got those marks you needed.
Claire-Anne -
WOW!
This is SUPER intense!
The anger- the fury- the rage...
It's BRILLIANT!
I love this so very very much- wonderful write! Wonderful read.. -
so much anger but you have channeled it magnificently
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a very angry poem, being a punk i tend to like angry poems. keep up the good work and nice job
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Wow..the anguish, the pain, the hatered...all well expressed.
Nevadapoet -
oversight
you are but one of many people in this person's life. odds are, you are not the fulcrum by which her life's balance depends. you hold little sway where her well-being is concerned. that is...unless you do something to physically alter it. anger is a very revealing emotion, and i advise you to be a bit more selective when picking an enemy. you are not projecting anything resembling an upper hand in this piece of writing. it's a teen-age delusion in shoddy guise. but, if you feel better...that's all that matters.
use your head, calm down and play the game from a different angle. visible temper is not a clever or threatening attribute. you'll learn that soon enough. -
Holy crap
I'm not sure I should be saying anything at all so please forgive but I have had many of those thoughts myself for a different nightmare of a human-being. Well said I loved the part "agony and misery will be your food and drink" perfect! I just may not come over for dinner though. Thank you and sorry just in case, Boog
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You think you are better than me,
More knowledgeable, more bright,
Well you can forget that now,
You can wish you never crossed my path,
Wish I were a mere nightmare,
But all your wishes will be petty ashes.
I am real!
And the pain I will cause you
Will be too real!
the foolish girls always think they are better -
SWEET!!!!!!!!!
I think there are a few people I'd like to do this to as well. Good luck.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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omg i love this this is so amazing
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Wow!! I've never really been this angry at any of my teachers before, but with an ex friend yes, becuz of sumthing he had done that he promised he wouldn't. I could feel the anger you put in this, very well written and good luck in the contest.
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Wow! I've never been this angry with my teacher (that I can remember) it's been awhile! lol But I have been this angry and more with my ex.
One of my favorite parts is:"Agony and misery will be your food and drink" Great!!!
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Very well expressed ^_^
I also know a teacher I'd like to say this about. I no longer have to suffer her class though.
I promise to submit an entry to your contest soon.
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Such venom seeths in this! WOW,and I thought only I held such strong contempt unuttered except in a few outburst. You go get um girl! This almost sounds like a summoned curse.Careful what you wantenly will,it comes back to us you know.Actually,you and I seem sisters under the skin in passions.Nice down dressing lady!
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