Words casted like stones
Hands cut like blades
Chains that bind
Soul dead
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Prompt ~ Womanizer
13 words
Dig your nails in and let me feel the pain...
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A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Im a first timer...
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I didn't think this was marvellous, though it did have its' good qualities. Read your rival poets/poetess' poems and find out for yourself where you fall in the grading of it all
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NICE
I HAVE BEEN DOWN THAT ROAD. GREAT JOB ON THE POEM -
Deeply grasping and vividly descriptive... x
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Hm.... I really like the first line "Words casted like stones" that really had me. I really wish the rest of the poem was about that... because that would make a beautiful poem... Because I'm not much of a dark poem reader -- so I didn't much like the rest. But, the first line was very captivating I must say.
Hehe... Great job... on that line
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Wow.. this was really good. I really think that you did a good job with the prompt..Well done..
Jetleena
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beautiful. best of luck in the contest.
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