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The Ride Of A Lifetime

Horse neighing in joy
saddle thrust and legs bouncing
raring to journey
adventures here we take flight
flying swiftly without wings

a pleasure to ride
the freshness of morning air
and snort and whinny
musty scent of man and horse
mingle in pure contentment

run up a fine sweat
take shade under leafy frond
at fast pace again
ride beyond the setting sun
horse and man towards heaven...

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Triple Tankas

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  • carole21
    May 12, 2008

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    nice

    nice descriptive write . . liked "flying swiftly without wings" and "mingle in pure contentment" . . congrats on the trophy

  • InBetweenThoughts
    April 12, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT