So much power
Yet so much pain
I look in your soul and see all your shame
That beast in you is a terrible thing
Praying on your weakness and your doubt
But worry not
Cause I will tame your beasts
And I will take your pain
And turn it to gain
And you will live a new life
Filled with no more pain
And no more shame
A life Full of love and Success
And I will be here
Watching over you
Watching you grow
Seeing all the places you will go
As long as you stay true to you
There is nothing you can’t do
And the world will finally see
Everything you can be
Even if it has to be
Without me
Author notes
Inspired by "The Subway"
A contest entry
- "GOLD" "SILVER" "BRONZE" by wingsofgold25.
1000 points, ended April 23, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very well written piece although the end could be kinda sad. thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

