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What is love?

Love is something you may never understand
when someone is there to hold your hand.
they love you in the thin and throughout the thick
to be by your bed and comfort when you when you are sick.
Love is kissing and holding the person of whom you care,
someone who helps you with things you can hardly bare,
love is when they give you their last breath of air.

Love is when you let them go
they come back to you when you are really low.
Love is sitting by your side,
wanting to be your guide
even if they know you lied.

love is something that you may loose
if their love you try to abuse.
Even when you scream and kick and shout,
still caring is what love's about.

Love is when they do what is right,
sleeping by your side every night,
guiding you to the light.

Love is the best feeling I will ever know,
I will never let my true love go.

Author notes

What is love?
"What is love? Baby don't hurt me don't hurt at all!"

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  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    August 5, 2008
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    wow this is great! you have a talent and you have a great chance in this.!♥♥♥


  • Sound of Madness
    July 7, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest. In the 13th line you have "will may". Other than that it's a flawless poem. I wish you much luck.


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    June 17, 2008

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    I totally agree with this poem.
    What is love ? Such a fickle word, yet you descibe this edgy feeling perfectly. True love concures all. And you have truly captured this within your write !
    Excellent !!!!


  • Ashley Mosely
    April 29, 2008
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    nice piece but i don't see the quote used to inspire this write and that is a requirement


  • Lonely Christina
    April 13, 2008
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    here ya go

  • Lonely Christina
    April 12, 2008

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    great write! this describes true love exactly wen i get summore points to spare i will definatly give u applause

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