She danced
among the evergreens
under dark of night.
she entertained -
uncaring of her nakedness.
The forest was her master.
Author notes
the pic prompt looks like a naked wooden ballerina to me, so that was my inspiration for this piece.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie 20 poets/20 words by jasminerose.
900 points, ended April 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Woa!
Now that is one hot plant and poem to bless it !
A true vision in vestigual linguistic vegetation!
I love it! Thanks for the wake up my friend..
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oh how beautiful...
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thank you your majesty *bows deeply*
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I too received this image via email Terry, and, like you I saw the dancer - that's where it stopped for me but you went that one mighty step further and produced your lovely verse. I believe this is what the photographer saw too.
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I saw the dance right away Vonnie as did the photographer I am sure, this is one image I never tire of looking at. glad to see you grace us with your presence my friend. dont be a stranger...peace
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cool peom
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thanks
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I really enjoyed it. A little longer than most haiku but this is what it felt like to me. Your words compliment the picture and add meaning. Very creative, thanks for writing.
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the sweet dancer of the evergreen, uncaring of her nakedness, seeks only to please her master of the forest...very enjoyable read...niaish for sharing with me
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thank you TW
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I love the write but that picture is what really got my attention.
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the picture caught my attention as well missy. as soon as I saw it i thought it looked like a dancer...peace
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A superb write, and a very interesting picture to have inspired your poem.
good writing and I wish you luck in the contest
Dee
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Evergreens enteraining as she danced. Love it!!!
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