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My Pain. My Pleasure

Pain is my pleasure

It's in my blood

The blood spills out

From my wrist

As the razor cuts through

A sting goes up my arm

Tears in my eyes

Why do I do this?

It stings,

It itches,

But I can't stop

I like this feeling

Don't make it stop

It's feelings I can control

My feelings alone

No one else feels

The razors sharp edge

As it touches my wrist

They don't feel the pressure

As I push on the blade

Harder and harder

Deeper and deeper

More and more blood

My pain

My pain alone

Only I can take it

Only I can cause it

My razor

My wrist

My blood

My pain

My pleasure

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 21, 2008
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    been there, done that... Kind of.


  • BlackBloodyRose
    May 14, 2008

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    i likey i likey

    i liek how you say the truth about it stings and itches. cutting really sucks so why do we continue to do it

  • wristbiter3398
    April 23, 2008
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    deep

    awesome


  • ucancallmereal
    April 21, 2008
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    woahhhh how strong
    never cut myself but i felt like i was there
    nice job


  • PoetryXisXmyXshieldX
    April 14, 2008
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    You dont no how much i can relate to this...a good write...


  • Sound of Madness
    April 12, 2008
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    You captured the senstaion very well. Good job.


  • BeautifullyBroken88
    April 12, 2008
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    Good, i'm glad.... I find it alot easier to write about.

  • BeautifullyBroken88
    April 12, 2008
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    As much as I enjoyed this read. I was once there, I knew what it was like having the rush...but the wounds heal. Scars stay there forever. You are so much more than this! I managed to seek help, or rather help found me. Your a special person just like everyone else.
    Ever need to talk, gimmie a shout... I'll listen.
    good job!

    BB88 -X-


    • jeseejoy
      April 12, 2008
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      I have stopped. Now insted of cutting I write. but thank you for comment

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