Days of silver,
Days of gold.
Life goes on,
Never to be gone,
Even when we're old.
Days of silver,
Days of light.
Life is pure,
I am sure,
Days of silver will come.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
525 points, ended April 13, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 195 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is so effective using few words, really liked the use of metaphhor and the sense of hope at the end. it's raining so hard today it's good to think that it'll change and the sun/hope will soon return. cheers
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A really good Poem!!!!!! Please enter some more!!!! i'll be glad to read them!!!!! Good luck in the contest!!!!!
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Wonderful
Very well done Best of luck in the contest.
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nice
nice inspirational write for the prompt . . liked "Life goes on" and "Days of silver will come" . . good luck in the contest . .
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