Come see me,
I'm turning into the person I was meant to be.
In the past,
I was pulled this way and that.
Finally,
I've decided to fight back.
After sleepless nights,
Along with worrisome fights.
After days of pulled-out hair,
closets where I lived in fear.
After people holding on, but not letting go.
I am MORE than ready to be my own hero.
My poor body and my poor mind,
Slowly repairing.
With the help of time.
So I'll shed this blight!
ALL the people!
Plus their dead weight!
For in my own way,
I'm making a path!
For this day and everyday.
Hopefully now,
you'll be able to see,
The person that I was meant to be.
Come and see.
Author notes
This poem is for the Gold.
Mistakes? Improvements that need to be made? Tips and tricks? I'd like some advice please.
Comments
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A beautiful write, that kept me captivated during the whole read. Thank you very much for entering.
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This is such a positive piece of writing and carries the conviction of feeling and purpose. I didn't find the capitals in MORE and ALL were necessary as they seemed to take away from the flow and I think the words are strong enough without them but that is just personal opinion. I really like the way you began and ended the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for a very beautiful write.
I like it very much.
Thank myou for your entry.
And good luck in the contest. -
Hopefully now you'll be able to see,
The person that I was meant to be.
one day i too shall find out who im meant to be.. Hopefully... congrats on you finding, you...
as for the poem its good i like... -
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Thank you for the compliment, and good luck on finding who you are. It's a tough journey, so you'll need all the luck you can get...
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