I didn't know that this would happen~
Not that I wasn't expecting it~
Everybody is surprised at some time in their life~
Very frequently, the surprise isn't surprising~
Even if you haven't been expecting it~
Real life isn't what you think~
I didn't know that this would happen~
(thoughts)
(last)
Author notes
by an 11 year old
Option 3
Acrostic NEVER
A contest entry
- Time for a detailed contest....no quickie here. All options, prompts and honest muse. by isisspirit.
540 points, ended April 12, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Critique! I love critical comments!
Comments
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hmmm...
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This was... impressive. For someone who is 11 years old. It reminds me of when I was that age, only about 2 years ago, mind you. Keep up the great work, I hope to see more from you.
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If you are seriously 11 years old this is amazing, in fact, it is top notch regardless of your age. I like how you included the acrostic, the line lengths are really effective as are the breaks. The word very seemed a little forced but nothing worthy of scorn. This shows wisdom and reflection. An admirable piece.
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Thank you very much for the wondrous comment! Yes I am eleven. This poem was enjoyable to write, and thank you very much for the bronze!
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