wispy wind~
curled smoke
disseminates
A contest entry
- THE WILD HAIKU by Swan song.
1259 points, ended April 19, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Quckly I might add. Well done very good imagery


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<==blows a smoke ring...this is incredible. i'm truly amazed at the quantity in these five outstanding words...makes me wanna inhale.lol love this.


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It surprises me how sometimes 5 words can give a greater image than 50. This is simple, yet wonderful.



