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hunter of the empty chalice



hunter
of the empty chalice
drink of flesh not soul
but never
taste









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the punishment for having what you take is never receiving it

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  • BellaD
    April 13, 2008
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    Very deep!

    Love the originality of this piece. Best of luck in the contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Lovely! Very creative and unique write for the prompt...beautiful but sad...may it always be only of the flesh in such cases and not the soul...
    Best,
    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 13, 2008
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    Certainly a different and very unique take on the prompt ~ quite attention grabbing indeed!.. x