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[ Strong again ]

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Strong again
You picked me up
Back on the path
You have work
for me to do
Kids to love
teens to cherish
heartaches gone now
pains forgotten
love and hope rule

and Lord...
I am sorry
I almost forget
what you had
for me to do

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  • beautiful ...Brother

    As always you you have humbled yourself and saw the need to ask for forgivness foe God knows your heart and he will deliver you....Much blessings....Angel

  • I could feel the emotion in this poem. The Lord always loves you no matter what and He always will welcome you back with open arms.
    Great write.
    Keep it up.


  • WordsDoMatter
    April 25

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    right on

    how easy it is to become distracted (and how subtle Satan's ways) - thanks for the reminder. the last verse is powerful - Kevin


  • Killerzombies
    April 14

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    I am not religious but this is hopeful and inspiring. Great write. Love the picture too it matches well

  • awwww....that is amazing....


  • kikis1969
    March 14

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    I feel that what The Lord has for us to do is the very same good things that we already do! He puts things in our path, He guides us to where He wants us! If only we just listen with our hearts then I believe we will be okay!

    Kiki

  • Man, do I relate to this. There are many times when I have to stop and think...remember that He has something for me to do that is beyond just making it through the day. How easy it can be stray.

    I really love the strength portrayed here...His strength in you.


  • honey bear
    January 29

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    a beautiful write my friend sometimes we all stray a little from the strait and narrow path but his gentle arm guides us back again


  • ConjurerCaptainTam
    November 3, 2008
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    im not religious but
    that was beautiful
    i liked.
    keep writing


  • Leonura
    October 28, 2008
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    beautiful and expressive. soemthing that only a heartfelt poem can show.


  • arnica karuna
    June 13, 2008

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    this one sounds very beautiful, more so because I myself have stepped onto a path of self realization and with every passing day, I feel myself coming closer to my God. I am thankful to you for sharing this piece.
    Cheers and keep writing.


  • warrior-eagle
    May 14, 2008

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    I hope I NEVER forget my calling.
    And let go of MY pain, my hurts and aches
    in order to help others and speak for those who cannot.
    Because before helping others to heal we must be healed ourselves and that's what I have--HIS healing.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • Sandygram
    May 8, 2008

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    A beautiful poem my friend. God is so amazing. He gives us His love to share with those in need of it so we can forget about our own pain. He is truly an Amzing God. A beautiful and uplifting poem!!!

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 21, 2008

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    This is touching, and revealing of a heart tender toward Jesuslol


  • stavykm gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Oh I loved this part and it is humbling for me to read for I too forget the Lord is in charge of my life

    and Lord...
    I am sorry
    I almost forget
    what you had
    for me to do

    [Strong Again] is a beautiful title to a beautiful poem. Thank you my dear brother and friend for sharing with me.
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm

    • Spiritual Poet gold member
      April 14, 2008
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      yes my friend

      We oft let our own hurts and sorrows drag us away from God's plans for us. I let some recent hurts drag me away and the calls from wounded kids........ Daddy, we need you........ I had to come back and lay aside my hurts. My own hurts and pains don't matter that much but the children God has given me to shepherd are all that matters. I turned back to them and the pain went away. God bless you my precious friend for your always encouraging comments. Love and friendship always, Mark


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    April 12, 2008

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    I LOVE YOU DADDDY FOR WHAT YOU DO WHAT YOU WRITE AND WHAT YOU ARE
    this poem was just a great poem to start my day i was preparing to go to church its almost 8 am and ur poem made my heart as happpy as a lark


  • He Is My Lighthouse
    April 12, 2008

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    Mark, I really enjoyed this. Isn't it good when we remember what God has for us to do. I also love the picture.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    April 12, 2008
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    I like this daddy. I love you.

  • amy86
    April 12, 2008
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    a beautifully written poem of hope and finding happiness. well done x

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