Used for something that meant nothing blinded by charm he threw me away
A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do ya think?
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POWERFUL
been there done that, and it sucks big time, i never put it so simply or powerfully as you have here, wow!
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short and powerful.. well done.
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thanks =]
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Vivid and real... x
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