When I am lost and alone.
When my world is going crazy, and I can't seem to be found.
I know you will be there to turn it all around.
For the rain starts pouring and your tears are coming down to the ground.
The two tears are joined together before they ever hit ground.
Yours and mine for you are with me even now.
In my heart you will be living through me,I just hope I will be the one to make you proud.
For there is holes in floor of heaven and I know that you are wishing you could be with me now.
You are the stars guiding me through the dark telling me not to fall apart.
To keep holding on,and be strong for something better is bound to come along.
I know you are there and you care when the rain is falling it is your tears calling.
They wash all over me joined with my own, why did you have to go.
Before I even got the chance to let you know, just how much I would miss you so.
I hope you know that I love you no matter what had gone on and I hope I never forget thee.
Please you don't for get me, as our tears join the sea.
The circle of life is complete, but will I ever completely be the same me.
A contest entry
- Fruits of the Spirit. Contest (Big Points) Prewrites ok by z etoile.
1000 points, ended October 21, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MAKE ME FEEL by Cena-of-Destiny.
2750 points, ended October 17, 2008, 45 entries
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the commas seem a bit off, but overall good write. still i wanted a poem and not a story or long narrative, sorta.
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great
the last line has typos. besides that you are an excellent author i am very glad to have found your work.
you convey such emotion. thank you.
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Now this is really an outpouring of your feelings, for your late grandmother I guess. It is beautiful and she will love it and she will know every single word is from your heart. Of course she knows how you felt, Grandmothers do know these things, we have lived a long time and know all the signs and there is not always a need for the spoken word. But you can tell her yourself one day.
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really?
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Thi is to
All the loved ones that are lost on a daily bases.
You are not forgotten.
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