"I Love You Lulu"
-Hang Up-
Dial again...
Hey Jess! I Love You!!
Author notes
Prick cheated. Jess wasn't the only other one. Worst part is how much he denied it!
Note: I made the background awhile ago from a picture Ravenblood provided me with and it was for her contest. Hope it's ok I used it for this poem.
It suits.
I still love him.
But he makes me sick.
A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting. Lulu is my nickname thanks for loving me.LOL.
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Sad
This is quite a sad but very well penned poem for such a calibe rin the contest which I bid you good luck with. any ways what really makes this sad least to me is how he could cheat you and admit denial of it and well it just makes him look apthetic. any ways nice write & thanks for explaining in the author's note. hope all is well with you and take care.
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Great job telling a story in thirteen words. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
(For what it's worth, I think you should find someone more deserving of your love!)
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Very nice take on it.. Took me a moment to understand it but thats probably because its me, Claire.
U luffles you, And it's awesome with the background! Good luck huni
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Classic! lol. Such a cool take.. x
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