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Symphony For Two

My breath catches
deep within my soul
and the passion in your eyes
becomes my heartbeat.

As my bones liquefy
hands sear my craving flesh
and I am a wild river of flames
you have ignited.

The angels play
hymns of blessed music
as you pluck each string
consummately.

I willingly surrender
to your vibrating harp.

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“When I look on you a moment, then I can speak no more, but my tongue falls silent, and at once a delicate flame courses beneath my skin, and with my eyes I see nothing, and my ears hum, and a wet sweat bathes me, and a trembling seizes me all over”- Sappho

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  • The Poetic Angel
    April 12, 2008

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    this is awsome mum it so butiful

    the passion in your eyes
    becomes my heartbeat.

    love that part

    xxx cheeky xxx