Feeding me words,
sensual
like chocolate,
turn poison;
plagiarized Haiku
now an epidemic.
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Author notes
Prompt ~ Womanizer
Dig your nails in and let me feel the pain...
A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations Lyndaloo~~~ WOO HOO TOO YOU!!
Jazzy
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.. can this be my lovely angel putting such things on to a page ... it is ... and I love you even more for it
Congrats on the silver placing for a poem that is soft when eaten, but burns with acid while digesting.
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lmao
Yep its me
When a kitten is backed in a corner, she has to come out fightin'
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Wow
roflmao @ the last part of your author's note! Oh how sweet it is when you write such deep powerful abstract poetry of this caliber. any ways really love the over all sheer complexness ( is that a word ... oh well )through out this poem. I love the depth and the over all quality through out this poem too. any ways wonderfully done and keep up the very nice work here Aunt Lynda n good luck with the contest.
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This is just absolutely clever... x
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OUCH!!
Lies, deception... written brilliantly! I think your heart has been healed
All my best Sis
Jazzy
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This piece stikes hard on the cymbal of alarm about those who would take gifts of art and use them so blatantly to advance their own agenda with no regard for the art. I can emphasize.
Love,
Tom B.
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Wonderful write.... and so sad too...the pain of lies and deceit, makes one a bit more wary and wiser next time.....good luck...
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Lovely lines of poetic disappointment...transfered into love diverted...wonderful angel poet
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ty my dear friend...I don't do it often but sometimes you just have to vent about the past and its dissapointments. How else would we see how much better today is
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